When we first met, we just walked
Did not know, but nervous as hell
We went for coffees, and just talked
And night quickly fell
Your Eyes as blue as the sky
Your smile so nice
I was feeling very shy
I thought this would come with a price
Nermit and Ribbit are your boys
They are really sweet
And quite a joy
They love their crickets for a treat
I hope this stays this way
I hope I never forget what to say.
I think that the form had a effect on my writing. It was very hard to come up with things that rhymed and how I truly felt. I did not think that writing a sonnet would have been this hard but it was. Anyways I think that my mood and tone was influences by the form trying to come up with things that fit together and how I felt about this new guy that is in my life. Even talked about his pets, which are very sweet and cute. They are red eye tree frogs. :) I did not use poetic language because it wouldnt of fit in there, would of looked weird in there.
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